Friday, 31 October 2014

PURPOSE to describe
WALT show not tell in our writing

I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging

·                     Write in the third person
·                     Use capital letters and full stops.

Monday 20th October 2014

She was happy and excited when she went for a swim on a hot sunny day with her best friend.

He was jumping up and down, when he saw his friend he knew straight away that his best friend was going to take them for a swim. His best friend waved to him on a hot burny  day at the warm, golden beach. As he was running into the warm water he realized that a black and gray fin, gliding through the water coming towards him.

His mouth was wide open but nothing was coming out…….

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