Wednesday, 10 September 2014

Show Don't tTell

WILF
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging

WALT show not tell in our writing

She tucked into a ball. Her lips were cold and purple. She was silent. She started to get goosebumps all over her arms. She started to shake so hard that she broke out of her tucked ball. She was just wondering   about what her punishment would be…...


Can you guess what emotion he or she is having?







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